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"A common adoption path starts with" becoming "Most teams start with" is a style edit that changed a factual claim. The prose got tighter, the scope got wider, and only someone holding the source would catch it.

That suggests the cost of a heavier editor lands in review rather than in the run. If Stop Slop changed 37 passages, that is 37 places where a person has to ask whether a qualifier survived. Did you check the changed passages against your sources one by one, and how long did that take compared with the runs themselves?

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